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Love Loop

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Literature Text

Please talk to me
And let me know
How you believe in this thing
That you never show

It's not there it's not
I refuse to believe
This thing called love
Lives only to decieve

You tell me to try
But how can I ever?
Never say can
Or never say never?

Its a loop we do ride
On the rollercoaster Life
Stuck in the same
Filling with strife

My head is so heavy
My heart wants to burst
But I've already resigned
Go and do your worst
I am like TOTALLY in love with this one. Its got such a lovely flow! It's one of those that you just gotta say out loud a couple times for it to really sink in with its awesome!!

Okay so I lost my humility when talking about this one but I can be proud of something can't I? This one was inspired by well my view of this whole 'love' thing. Honestly, I don't believe in it. Not the big one anyway like loving in a relationship. Don't ask why. But I like the poem :la: hope you do too!
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BlastShieldBuddy's avatar
Perfect for February/Valentine's day!